SAT寫作的重點(diǎn)話題整理
2025-06-26 11:27:34 來源:中國教育在線
考試重點(diǎn)一:創(chuàng)新類
Is creativity needed more than ever in the world today?
參考思路:大家要注意today 這個(gè)措辭。此題適合準(zhǔn)備個(gè)人例子。有了創(chuàng)造力,才能distinguish yourself from others, 不妨借鑒班上一個(gè)馬來西亞同學(xué)說過一的學(xué)生會(huì)競選的有趣故事。他說最后獲勝者提出了很creative 的東西來吸引學(xué)生,比如:
1)(boarding school) shopping, once a month 一月安排一次集體購物,他們是寄宿學(xué)校。
2) (Single-sex education ) ball, invite the girls in the girls-school, 一周安排一次集體舞會(huì),要求女校學(xué)生參加。這就是與眾不同啊。
重點(diǎn)二:物質(zhì)類別
Is it more important to do work that one finds fulfiling or work that pays well?
參考思路:比較難寫的題目。較容易額方法是些賺錢重要,因?yàn)閽炅隋X才能實(shí)現(xiàn)夢想,獲得fulfilling.
開頭段:Working for a well-paid job is more important. When one can get a considerable income, he can utilize this amount of wealth to do those things he finds fulfilling. The King of Steel, Andrew Carnegie, is one example that can prove the above point of view.
中間框架: 卡內(nèi)基童年貧苦——只能讀夜?!虼讼M麕椭嗳俗x上書——努力工作——內(nèi)戰(zhàn)買了鋼的專利權(quán)——建了公司——賺了錢——實(shí)現(xiàn)夢想——投生教育事業(yè)。
參考:童年艱苦 Andrew Carnegie had an arduous childhood: as the age of 13, as an emigrant from Scotland to America, he squeezed in an incredibly tiny apartment with other immigrants. He struggled for his survival, finding a job in one factory after another. Having no access to welfare, to education and medical services, he was deprived of all basic rights.
營造童年夢想Living under this extreme poverty, Andrew Carnegie knew and understood so deeply about the torture within, and he developed a dream to provide a better live for the poor.
營造掙錢Andrew Carnegie took great notice of the business world and his sharp discernment paid him back. During the Civil War, Andrew Carnegie discovered the potential of steel industry and thus bought a patent of steel to operate his own company.
Over 20 thousand employees
A market share of 65%
An annual income of $40 million
橫線部分過渡是重點(diǎn),營造賺錢和滿足感的關(guān)系:It was this well-paid job that made Andrew Carnegie’s childhood dream come true. With the wealth he had accumulated, he fulfilled his youthful ‘a(chǎn)mbition’ by making his contribution to the realms of philanthropy.
營造夢想的實(shí)現(xiàn)Paying special attention to libraries and higher education, Carnegie invested in building of many local libraries and Carnegie Mellon University. These efforts changed many American’s lives, offering their invaluable knowledge.
議論部分:
1 總結(jié)例子For the example of Andrew Carnegie, we can see that he had made use of his fortune from a well-paid job to do what he urged to do and to achieve a sense of fulfillment.
2 表述觀點(diǎn) Therefore, it is more important to have a well-paid job so that we can accomplish our dreams relying on the wealth we gained from our work.
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